I thought there was a tiling error for have a second until I realized that was a tight rope, haha. I love this, but it might look better without the tight rope. But your style here is incredible, I love it.

I really love these Characters, but the tightrope does break up the design, and it would perhaps be better without it. Alternatively, add texture and a curve to the rope and add supports on the side so that it looks like a tightrope. Nicely done!

I do have the same thing without the tightrope, and I'm in full agreement. I feel a bit stupid for being hasty, and having sort of sent in the wrong one.
( hits herself in the head)

now that i look at it more than once...
the background color is way to muddy...